V2 Heat A: Revised Diagram Field Guide
Four AI models revised their first-pass diagrams after critique, constraint, and more context. V2 is not first instinct — V2 is adaptation. Review each one, then vote.
Poll question: After revision, which diagram shows the clearest improvement in communicating the ROY argument?
The poll runs on LinkedIn. Follow OverKill Hill P³™ on LinkedIn to participate when each heat goes live.
ChatGPT V2
Denser reasoning. Explicit loop logic with brand and mechanics. More deliberate, less merely clever.
a picture is worth 1000 words"] P["Text-only explanation
starts feeling like polite confusion"] Q{"Keep this in prose?"} T0["Stay in text
accept slower comprehension"] M{"Define the real metric
ambiguity removed ÷ effort spent"} end subgraph A2["Act II — Forge 🛠️"] direction TB B["Brain-dump hooks
angles, metaphors, examples"] D["Draft post v0"] L["Ask LLM for Mermaid v1"] H{"Honest process
or fake happy path?"} F1["Add forks, doubt
dead ends, loopbacks"] F2["Kill clutter
keep signal ✂️"] E["Diagram earns its space"] end subgraph A3["Act III — Finish 🚀"] direction TB ST["Tune labels, shapes
color, hierarchy, swagger"] R{"Clear faster than
text alone?"} RW["Revise again"] PK["Package proof
diagram image + code image + hosted link"] SH["Publish to LinkedIn"] BR["OverKill Hill P³™
Words → Structure → Systems → Leverage"] end subgraph A4["Act IV — Learn 🔁"] direction TB C[("Comments, questions
confusion signals")] N["Feed insight into
the next diagram"] end S --> P P --> Q Q -- Yes --> T0 Q -- No --> M M --> B B --> D D --> L L --> H H -- Too tidy --> F1 F1 --> L H -- Too noisy --> F2 F2 --> L H -- Credible --> E E --> ST ST --> R R -- No --> RW RW --> ST R -- Yes --> PK PK --> SH SH --> BR & C C --> N N --> B S:::spark P:::risk Q:::gate T0:::muted M:::core B:::core D:::core L:::core H:::gate F1:::risk F2:::risk E:::win ST:::core R:::gate RW:::risk PK:::publish SH:::publish BR:::brand C:::feedback N:::feedback classDef spark fill:#FFF4CC,stroke:#D6A700,color:#4A3B00,stroke-width:2.6px classDef core fill:#EAF2FF,stroke:#3563D9,color:#13213C,stroke-width:1.6px classDef gate fill:#F4ECFF,stroke:#7C3AED,color:#31135E,stroke-width:2px classDef risk fill:#FFF1F2,stroke:#DC2626,color:#7F1D1D,stroke-width:1.8px classDef win fill:#EEFDF3,stroke:#2F855A,color:#12331D,stroke-width:2px classDef publish fill:#ECFDF5,stroke:#059669,color:#064E3B,stroke-width:2.2px classDef brand fill:#F3F4F6,stroke:#4B5563,color:#111827,stroke-width:2.1px classDef feedback fill:#FFF7ED,stroke:#DD6B20,color:#5B3415,stroke-width:1.8px classDef muted fill:#FAFAFA,stroke:#94A3B8,color:#64748B,stroke-width:1.2px,stroke-dasharray: 4 3 style A1 fill:#F8FBFF,stroke:#3563D9,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#13213C style A2 fill:#FFFCF2,stroke:#D7A322,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#4C3510 style A3 fill:#F3FFF6,stroke:#2F855A,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#12331D style A4 fill:#FFF7ED,stroke:#DD6B20,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#5B3415 linkStyle 2 stroke:#94A3B8,stroke-width:1.8px,stroke-dasharray: 5 4,fill:none linkStyle 8 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2.2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 9 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 10 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2.2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 11 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 15 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2.2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 16 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 20 stroke:#DD6B20,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 3 4,fill:none linkStyle 22 stroke:#DD6B20,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 3 4,fill:none
Copilot V2
Architecture preserved. Emotion and discipline. Boardroom-ready if flair does not damage structure.
A picture is worth 1,000 words?"] B["Question the proverb"] C{"Is the visual
actually earning its space?"} D["Decorative wallpaper
with a superiority complex"] E["Potential clarity multiplier"] F["Define the real metric:
ambiguity removed ÷ effort spent"] end subgraph A2["✍️ Prose / Framing"] direction TB G["Notice the real problem:
most documentation is polite confusion"] H["Draft ugly first post"] I{"Does the hook land?"} J["Rewrite the open
kill the clever, keep the honest"] K["Find the thesis:
prose sets up, visuals compress"] end subgraph A3["🧭 Modeling / Mermaid"] direction TB L["Ask LLM for Mermaid skeleton"] M["Render V1 🧪"] N{"Honest... or fake happy path?"} O["Add forks, loops,
dead ends, doubt"] P["Too noisy?
Kill clutter, keep signal ✂️"] Q["Tune labels, order,
hierarchy, styling"] R["Diagram starts earning trust"] end subgraph A4["📈 ROY Check"] direction TB S["ROY = Return on Your Words"] T{"Clear faster than
text alone?"} U["Revise again"] V["Trim words around the visual"] W["✅ The picture earned its words"] end subgraph A5["🚀 Ship / Learn"] direction TB X["Export diagram image"] Y["Export code screenshot"] Z["Write post around proof:
words → structure → systems → leverage"] AA["Publish to LinkedIn"] AB["Drive readers to
OverKill Hill P³™"] AC["Comments reveal confusion,
questions, stronger examples"] AD["Feed signals into V2"] end A --> B B --> C C -- No --> D D --> F C -- Yes --> E E --> F G --> H H --> I I -- No --> J J --> H I -- Yes --> K L --> M M --> N N -- Too tidy --> O O --> M N -- Too busy --> P P --> Q Q --> M N -- Credible --> R S --> T T -- No --> U U --> Q T -- Mostly --> V V --> T T -- Yes --> W X --> Y Y --> Z Z --> AA AA --> AB & AC AC --> AD F --> G K --> L R --> S W --> X AD -. iterate .-> H AD -. refine .-> L A:::spark B:::core C:::gate D:::risk E:::win F:::insight G:::core H:::draft I:::gate J:::risk K:::insight L:::core M:::draft N:::gate O:::risk P:::risk Q:::core R:::win S:::insight T:::gate U:::risk V:::core W:::publish X:::publish Y:::publish Z:::publish AA:::publish AB:::brand AC:::feedback AD:::feedback classDef spark fill:#FFF4CC,stroke:#D6A700,color:#4A3B00,stroke-width:2.5px classDef core fill:#EAF2FF,stroke:#2B6CB0,color:#102A43,stroke-width:1.6px classDef draft fill:#F3F4F6,stroke:#6B7280,color:#334155,stroke-width:1.4px,stroke-dasharray: 5 3 classDef gate fill:#F3E8FF,stroke:#7C3AED,color:#3B0764,stroke-width:2px classDef risk fill:#FFF1F2,stroke:#DC2626,color:#7F1D1D,stroke-width:1.8px classDef win fill:#ECFDF5,stroke:#16A34A,color:#14532D,stroke-width:1.8px classDef insight fill:#FFF7E8,stroke:#D97706,color:#78350F,stroke-width:1.8px classDef publish fill:#EAF7F1,stroke:#059669,color:#064E3B,stroke-width:2.2px classDef brand fill:#F3F4F6,stroke:#374151,color:#111827,stroke-width:2.2px classDef feedback fill:#EFF6FF,stroke:#2563EB,color:#1E3A8A,stroke-width:1.8px,stroke-dasharray: 4 3 style A1 fill:#FFFCF2,stroke:#D6A700,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#4A3B00 style A2 fill:#F8FBFF,stroke:#2B6CB0,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#102A43 style A3 fill:#FFF8FB,stroke:#C05666,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#4A1020 style A4 fill:#F9FFF9,stroke:#16A34A,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#14532D style A5 fill:#F5F3FF,stroke:#6D28D9,stroke-width:1.5px,color:#312E81 linkStyle 2 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2.2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 3 stroke:#16A34A,stroke-width:2.2px,fill:none linkStyle 10 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 15 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2.2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 16 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2px,fill:none linkStyle 17 stroke:#16A34A,stroke-width:2.6px,fill:none linkStyle 20 stroke:#DC2626,stroke-width:2.2px,stroke-dasharray: 6 4,fill:none linkStyle 21 stroke:#D97706,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 4 4,fill:none linkStyle 22 stroke:#16A34A,stroke-width:2.8px,fill:none linkStyle 30 stroke:#2563EB,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 3 5,fill:none linkStyle 31 stroke:#2563EB,stroke-width:2px,stroke-dasharray: 3 5,fill:none
Gemini V2
Needs stronger conviction. Synthesis cannot become generic.
Messy Idea")) B["⚖️ ROI CALCULUS
Clarity vs. Friction"] C{"🔍 LOGIC AUDIT
Wallpaper or Weapon?"} end subgraph ARCHITECTURE["🌀 THE NON-LINEAR PATH"] direction LR D["🏗️ DRAFT V1
Initial Mermaid Syntax"] E@{ label: "🧪 STRESS TEST
Too 'Happy-Path'?" } F["🛠️ REFACTOR
Add Forks & Loops"] G["✂️ TRIM SIGNAL
Kill the Clutter"] end subgraph PAYOUT["🚀 THE SEMANTIC MULTIPLIER"] direction TB H["💎 VIBE CODE READY
Structural Excellence"] I["📢 POST ASSET
Words + Model + Link"] J(("✅ ROI ACHIEVED
Instant Synthesis")) end A --> B B --> C D --> E E -- Too Tidy --> F F --> D E -- Too Noisy --> G G --> D H --> I I --> J C -- Structural Weapon --> D C -- Decorative Junk --> A E -- Earns Its Space --> H J -. User Confusion .-> F E@{ shape: hexagon} A:::spark B:::core C:::gate D:::core E:::gate F:::risk G:::risk H:::win I:::publish J:::spark classDef spark fill:#FFF4CC,stroke:#D6A700,color:#4A3B00,stroke-width:3px,font-weight:bold classDef core fill:#E8F3FF,stroke:#2B6CB0,color:#0B2A4A,stroke-width:1.5px classDef gate fill:#EFE9FF,stroke:#6B46C1,color:#2A124D,stroke-width:2.5px classDef risk fill:#FFF1F2,stroke:#C53030,color:#5A1010,stroke-width:1.5px,stroke-dasharray:5 5 classDef win fill:#E9FBEF,stroke:#2F855A,color:#0F3D25,stroke-width:2.5px,font-weight:bold classDef publish fill:#F3F4F6,stroke:#374151,color:#111827,stroke-width:2px
Notion V2
Restraint under revision. Calm depth without overbuilding.
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